Tuesday, September 23, 2014

Day Six: Paragraphing

Dr. X's introductory paragraph for "Is Google making Us Stupid?"
"Don't be evil" is Google's corporate slogan, but many of Google'c critics are skeptical that Google's motto translates into actual practice. In “Is Google Making Us Stupid?” Nicholas Carr, for example, argues that the quick browsing encouraged by internet search engines such as Google is turning us into superficial thinkers. Carr begins the piece by arguing that the very quality that makes Google so useful –providing an impressive amount of information in nanoseconds—is also what makes it problematic, since human intelligence is based on the kind of deep, focused thinking that happens when our minds are unperturbed. To make money through ads, however, internet search engines such as Google encourage us to browse and skim websites, causing our line of reasoning to be constantly interrupted. The downside of Google’s usefulness as a means of information, then, is that it promotes superficial thinking. Carr ends his piece by encouraging us to turn our technological interrupters off so we can concentrate on thinking deeply. I believe Carr's claims that internet programs such as Google are making us shallow is correct. Internet programs tend to present information superficially, as small bits, and at the same time overwhelm us with too much information, all of which affects our memory retention.

Paragraphing

NOTE: What we do not finish in class becomes homework for the 2:15 class and lab/homework for the 5:45 class.
  1. Read/Annotate/Discuss: parts of a paragraph and the sandwich method to paragraphing (pp. 10-14). 
  2. Read/Discuss: The professor's development of a claim and of a thesis on pages 15-16 of the packet.
  3. Read "Closing Strategies" on page 18.
  4. In an MS Word document, type the following in response to "Hype": 
    • An Opening Paragraph with
      • a hook 
      • a summary (you may use one of the summaries below, if you wish) 
      • a thesis statement
    • One Body Paragraph that uses The Sandwich Method (p.11) and refers back to the reading
    • A short Closing Paragraph
      This typed document will be Print Portfolio Piece #5. 


     5. Complete these three CUNY Test tutorials from John Jay College of Criminal Justice:
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Two Satisfactory Summaries of "Hype":

In "Hype," Kalle Lasn shows how advertisements are contaminating the minds of American citizens. He begins the article by stating that the estimated number of ads people see on a daily basis goes up to billions. Everywhere people look, there is an ad, and it is spreading with the mass amount of new technology we have today. These ads are distracting people from the beauty of life with overflowing promotions and product messages. Lasn talks about how kids are watching Pepsi and Snicker ads at school, distracting them from learning/ Towards the end of the passage, Lasn says he used to hear symphonies play in his head, but now all he hears are commercial theme songs.


In "Hype," by Kalle Lasn, the author explains that people are being overwhelmed with too many advertisements. Lasn points out that from the moment we get up to the moment we go to bed, that is all we see! Lasn states that we are hit with about three thousand marketing messages per day by radio, billboards, and television. According to Lasn, there is nothing we can really do to get away from this; everyone is exposed.